Pub #5 - Love

Pub#5

Love can be expressed in many different forms. Some kinds are familial, romantic, friendship or even self-love. It’s about the act of caring and giving to someone else or having their best interest at heart. While loving someone is the best experience, losing that love can take a toll. The two poems that display the effects of losing love or how to deal with losing love are “First Love” by Jennifer Franklin and “The Long Deployment” by Jehanne Dubrow. The song that best relates to these two poems is “My Heart Will Go On” by Celine Dion.

The poem “First Love” by Jennifer Franklin, is about a woman who has lost her first love and the way she copes with that is by finding traits of her first love in other men she dates. She addresses this poem to her first love as if she is talking to him. Jennifer states, “I pass through life finding you over and over again” (5-7). She is saying that as she gets older and dates different men she still finds traits or things she loved about her first love in them. She is unable to let her first love go and it seems that it does become a problem in her relationships. She says “And every surrogate? Afflicted by my kindness, they leave me with my music” (9-13). This goes to show that her not being able to let go of her first love affects the relationships that she has now in that she is so focused on guys that exemplify her first loves characteristics that the men she dates don’t like it and they leave her.

The poem “The Long Deployment” by Jehanne Dubrow, is about a woman whose husband is in the military. Every deployment that he went on when she went to bed she would smell the sheets and his pillow to remember his smell. She states, “For weeks, I breathe his body in the sheet and pillow. I lift the blanket to my face. There’s bitter incense paired with something sweet, like sandalwood left sitting in the heat or cardamom rubbed on a piece of lace” (1-5). She takes in the scents of her husband every time she misses him. It isn’t realized until towards the end of the poem that the whole time her husband had actually been dead. Jehanne says, “I breathe his body in the sheet until he starts to fade, made incomplete, a bottle almost empty in its case. There’s bitter incense paired with something sweet. And then he’s gone. Not even the conceit of his remains, not the resinous base” (18-23). The only way she remembers her husband who died during deployment is by smelling the sheets when she goes to bed and when that smell disappears, it appears that she is sad and disappointed.

The song that ties these two poems together is called “My Heart Will Go On” by Celine Dion. This is an iconic song about love because it was in the movie titanic which is about two people who are at the time in different social classes and something like that wasn’t accepted. They meet on the boat Titanic which at the end of the movie the boat sinks after hitting an iceberg and Jack sacrifices himself to keep Rose from dying. The song is about losing love but also that she will remember her love, that he will be in her heart and she moves on.  This is shown when Celine sings “You are safe in my heart, And my heart will go on and on” (26-27) The song can compare to the poem “The Long Deployment” in that while Jehanne remembers her husband by smelling the bed sheets, in the song Celine remembers her significant other in her dreams she says, “Every night in my dreams, I see you, I feel you” (lines 1-3). She remembers her love by seeing him in her dreams. The song compares to the poem “First Love” in that while Jennifer copes with the loss of her first love by finding him in others, in the song, Celine keeps the love for her significant other by keeping him in her heart and remembering him.


Love is a powerful emotion that can be experienced in different forms. We express our love for others through different ways whether its writing a poem or singing a song about your significant other. The poems “First Love” and “The Long Deployment” can compare the song “My Heart Will Go On” by Celine Dion in that they all deal with the loss of the man she loved. Losing a loved one is hard thing to deal with and everyone has their ways of coping and these two poems and song show the ways these women dealt with losing their lover. While it is said, you can meet and fall in love with “the one” and there will be no one else, it can also be believed that if you do lose the one there is always someone else out there for you.

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